The Writing of Chris Ernest Halltag:djchall.com,2007-06-14:/blogs/writing/62008-05-14T06:30:50ZMovable Type Publishing Platform boomer-r21-65289Tim as a "sacred king"?tag:djchall.com,2008:/blogs/writing//6.4752008-05-14T05:55:00Z2008-05-14T06:30:50ZCould 1989 A Novel be seen as a cycle of birth, death and rebirth? Tim rules over the summer of '89, but symbolically dies in the fall after the quake, only to be resurrected on fifth floor when he hangs...Chris Ernest Hall ...came into being in the spring, reigned during the summer, and ritually died at harvest time, only to be reborn at the winter solstice to wax and rule again. The spirit of vegetation was therefore a "dying and reviving god." Osiris, Adonis, Dionysus, Attis and many other familiar figures from Greek mythology and classical antiquity
were re-interpreted in this mold. The sacred king, the human embodiment
of the dying and reviving vegetation god, was supposed to have
originally been an individual chosen to rule for a time, but whose fate
was to suffer as a sacrifice, to be offered back to the earth so that a new king could rule for a time in his stead.]]>
Serialize 1989?tag:djchall.com,2008:/blogs/writing//6.4742008-05-14T01:24:29Z2008-05-14T01:32:18ZChris Ernest Hall
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Celebrated Summer should be told from April's POVtag:djchall.com,2008:/blogs/writing//6.4732008-05-07T20:21:42Z2008-05-07T21:01:12ZCS is told from April's POV, so it begins and ends with her at the beach flats, trying to help rafe. That would be one way to cut stuff out. So would it only be scenes from April's POV? Or...Chris Ernest Hall What's the arc,though? What changes significantly in the course of the day? April experiences a rapprochement, with her mother as the result of her mom helping rafe, who ends up living with them? But that doesn't make sense with the plot of 1989 A Novel.
Maybe the ending is just April learning how much danger rafe is in, but as a stand-alone movie, how satisfying is that? Saves him temporarily, but with no long--term resolution? That might work. ]]>
Tim writes micro-fictiontag:djchall.com,2008:/blogs/writing//6.4722008-05-07T20:16:36Z2008-05-07T20:21:12ZDuring his creative writing class, Tim gets into writing micro-fiction, stories of 100 words or less. Some if it might be second person from Helen's POV (or "Miranda".) He collects them into a story called "What We Talk About When...Chris Ernest Hall
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Tim reads April's diarytag:djchall.com,2007:/blogs/writing//6.4542007-12-17T23:33:15Z2007-12-18T00:03:01ZAt some point, Tim sneaks into April and Andrea's house and reads her diary, desperate to learn what she is really up to. So we get to read April's diary all at once....Chris Ernest Hall So we get to read April's diary all at once.
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Episode I plotlinestag:djchall.com,2007:/blogs/writing//6.3992007-10-04T06:31:40Z2007-10-07T20:36:17Z1. Rivalry over Helen (between who?)2. Jake trying to arrange for a keg3. one more...Chris Ernest Hall
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How does Helen make an entrance?tag:djchall.com,2007:/blogs/writing//6.3972007-10-04T02:46:34Z2007-10-04T03:19:55ZChris Ernest Hall In a way, she is sort of summoned By Jake's desire? Or Tim's?
One way I thought of, but seems cliched: Jake compaining there aren't enough hot girls on their hall, to Tim, but while he's saying that, Tim stops paying attention, since he has seen Helen, who has entranced him.
That could work, but doesn't feel very original. Kind of teen comedy-esque. Cheezy.
Maybe I should resurrect the scene from Dotcom Faust? Jake and Tim play "ten women" while in the dining hall having dinner (or at a party?) Tim waits and waits, and just at the last possible moment, Helen walks through and Jake is like "you bastard!" ]]>
The one with the answerstag:djchall.com,2007:/blogs/writing//6.3962007-10-02T06:19:18Z2007-10-02T06:21:11ZJudah is the guy with the answers. More than Helen, he knows the reason why they are all gathered there. He’s also an unbelievable, decadent partier. He and Helen sometimes sleep together. (perhaps that’s revealed in the first episode.)What is...Chris Ernest Hall What is Judah's agenda? He longs to be free of his curse, but also is afraid of the light. Afraid of being happy. ]]>
Mid-season addition?tag:djchall.com,2007:/blogs/writing//6.3952007-10-02T06:08:52Z2007-10-02T06:09:38ZAlso need a hot girl with wicked332/off-beat sense of humor. Kind of Galen-esque, more hot than beautiful, though. Kind of a slut, too. She might not appear immediately—maybe she’s a friend of Jake’s who visits during fall quarter, then transfers?...Chris Ernest Hall
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Characters all play against typetag:djchall.com,2007:/blogs/writing//6.3932007-10-01T06:23:47Z2007-10-01T06:25:15ZJake is seemingly a ladies man, but deep down needs to be more in a relationship. Tim is very concerned with morality, but also afraid of commitment. He doesn’t really want to be in a relationship, just sexual experience. The...Chris Ernest Hall Tim is very concerned with morality, but also afraid of commitment. He doesn’t really want to be in a relationship, just sexual experience.
The deadhead stoner character is also one of the smartest and hardest studying. (Name? Davey? Pete?)
Lana is a deadhead girl, but with an odd twist (which is what? She’s a neat freak? compulsive?) Maybe Lana is Asian? Asian neat-freak deadhead chick.
Sophie is the other deadhead girl, whose parents are fabulously wealthy, but she never reveals it. Also a member of minor European royalty.
Helen: beautiful but strangely genuine. Millenia of loss have made her compassionate but also wary. She is careful of getting too close to anyone, and will only sleep with those she knows will not fall in love with her.
Jessica is a "good Jewish girl" but also a stoner and partier, with a somewhat anarchic sense of humor.
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Judas revealedtag:djchall.com,2007:/blogs/writing//6.3912007-09-28T06:15:58Z2007-09-28T06:16:53ZChris Ernest HallTim and Lana almost hook uptag:djchall.com,2007:/blogs/writing//6.3902007-09-28T06:14:00Z2007-09-28T06:15:27ZChris Ernest HallImmortality pilot episodetag:djchall.com,2007:/blogs/writing//6.3892007-09-28T05:55:39Z2007-09-28T05:57:31ZThe first night after everyone moves into the dorms, and wild partying erupts. A rivalry develops over the most beautiful girl on the floor, Helen, but just when things seem most tense, Tim steps in and brings peace, and everyone...Chris Ernest Hall"Undeclared meets Lost"tag:djchall.com,2007:/blogs/writing//6.3872007-09-27T00:40:32Z2007-09-27T00:50:31ZHour-long drama set in a northern California university in the late 80s, but with supernatural elements. One of the freshman girls is actually Helen of Troy. And one of the guys is Judas Iscariot. Doomed to immortality until they can...Chris Ernest Hall
Hour-long drama set in a northern California university in the late 80s, but with supernatural elements. One of the freshman girls is actually Helen of Troy. And one of the guys is Judas Iscariot. Doomed to immortality until they can commit the act that will set them free. Lots of other mysterious things happen too. Lots of characters. Hilarious beer drinking and stoner jokes as well.
Samantha's family historytag:djchall.com,2007:/blogs/writing//6.3862007-09-26T04:54:51Z2007-09-26T04:56:29ZChris Ernest Hall
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