October 2007 Archives

Episode I plotlines

| | Comments (0) | TrackBacks (0)
1. Rivalry over Helen (between who?)
2. Jake trying to arrange for a keg
3. one more

How does Helen make an entrance?

| | Comments (0) | TrackBacks (0)
Needs to be epic. But also funny. And memorable. She's one of the most important characters, the one who incites much of the action of the series. 

In a way, she is sort of summoned By Jake's desire? Or Tim's?

One way I thought of, but seems cliched: Jake compaining there aren't enough hot girls on their hall, to Tim, but while he's saying that, Tim stops paying attention, since he has seen Helen, who has entranced him.

That could work, but doesn't feel very original. Kind of teen comedy-esque. Cheezy.

Maybe I should resurrect the scene from Dotcom Faust? Jake and Tim play "ten women" while in the dining hall having dinner (or at a party?) Tim waits and waits, and just at the last possible moment, Helen walks through and Jake is like "you bastard!"

The one with the answers

| | Comments (0) | TrackBacks (0)
Judah is the guy with the answers. More than Helen, he knows the reason why they are all gathered there. He’s also an unbelievable, decadent partier. He and Helen sometimes sleep together. (perhaps that’s revealed in the first episode.)

What is Judah's agenda? He longs to be free of his curse, but also is afraid of the light. Afraid of being happy.

Mid-season addition?

| | Comments (0) | TrackBacks (0)
Also need a hot girl with wicked332/off-beat sense of humor. Kind of Galen-esque, more hot than beautiful, though. Kind of a slut, too. She might not appear immediately—maybe she’s a friend of Jake’s who visits during fall quarter, then transfers? What’s her name? Miranda? Hannah?

About this Archive

This page is an archive of entries from October 2007 listed from newest to oldest.

September 2007 is the previous archive.

December 2007 is the next archive.

Find recent content on the main index or look in the archives to find all content.

Powered by Movable Type boomer-r21-65289