When should Helen hang out with her old friends?
Should it be in Part I? Or save that for Part II?
I'm thinking of saving the scene with Joseph Harkes for Part II. So in Part I, we just set up Helen's friendship with her female friends (Roxy, Jessica and Gretchen) and her section. In Part II we see her with her Alta Lara friends (Jake, Peter and the rest of the claimstake, along with George) and her relationship with her professor Joseph Harkes.
I'm thinking of saving the scene with Joseph Harkes for Part II. So in Part I, we just set up Helen's friendship with her female friends (Roxy, Jessica and Gretchen) and her section. In Part II we see her with her Alta Lara friends (Jake, Peter and the rest of the claimstake, along with George) and her relationship with her professor Joseph Harkes.
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